haseler007

Students, I want to show that my character is feeling desperate, lonely and tired in the next section of my blog. In it, she is thinking about her dead baby, which died only a few weeks after being born. She is wondering whether the baby is in Heaven and, if so, how God can bear to see it, as she clearly feels it should still be alive. Help me out! What lexical choices could I make, what types of syntax would suit, how can I create the correct tone?

Thanks, MH.

~ by haseler007 on December 14, 2009.